I Came to Talk
I came to talk but you could not wait
The pain too great you took your leave
In shock I stood — fear, disbelief
but the truth was clear
that you’d gone from here
I hope you’ve found a place of peace
Amongst the trees by the mighty oak
As sunlight dances through the leaves
I chance you’ll catch a glimpse of me
Remembering you amongst the trees
On a starlit night so silver bright
The full moon calling out your name
I wish you hadn’t felt the pain
that made you take your life in vain
If only I had had that chance
to talk and ease away your pain
but you could not wait, I came too late
I didn’t know your time was near
Strong friendships stand the test of time
and ours supported both of us
We shared, we cared, we laughed and cried
you shared your strength and I shared mine
Then one day demons came to call
and they brought pain too great to bare
You lost your way, they did not care
Our friendship shattered, torn and tattered
I came to talk, I wish we had
but you could not wait, I came too late
A beautiful poem Annette, well expressed about the loss of your friend .
Annette – that’s a wonderful poem . It sums up so well the loss left by suicide .
Life goes on and we owe it to our loved ones to celebrate their lives and memories .
Well written poem about grief and loss .Heart felt and sincere. Thank you.
Annette,
such a true discription of a wonderful friendship, and the sadness felt for those who care, left behind to carry.
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Your pain also comes across in that Annette ,shows just how much of a friendship you had .you can be proud you continue to be that friend ,he knows that too 💙 beautifully written ❤
Beautiful annette, emotionally written from the heart xx
A lovely way of expressing a moment of trauma in life and dealing with it ,so well put in words.Congrats in your surviving of this circumstance.
A colleague at work just showed me this.I must say The blog is so impressive .Keep up the good work
Thank you to everyone for taking the time to read my poem and comment. Thanks FOSL for supporting me and enabling me to express my emotions. 🦋
Annette because you shared your pain and your hope you have touched the hearts of all of us particularly those that know the pain of being too late, not knowing that the day had come and we would not know and we were not there in time. Thank you so much. ❤️ Lucy
Well written Annette. I feel your pain. You were a great friend to Adrian. 🥰
An excellent blog and a great idea to help people in grief.I have looked at all your blog and am very impressed with the lay out.Please keep this going.
By sharing your own pain and loss you have lit the way for other to share theirs. Thank you for the sunshine and the tears.
Annette I wish I could express myself like that just beautiful xxx
Why is it so hard to talk when it’s one of the first things we learn? Things need to be said and your poem expresses that. Good on you Annette.
We share that feeling, deep in our soul. Thank you for this written! ❤️
Such an honest, beautifully written poem that will help many relate and find comfort.
Thank you Annette!
Beautiful poem Annette, good friends are hard to find, makes losing them so much harder💞💞💞
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Beautifully written Annette with so much meaning. ♥️💖💖💖💖💖💖